The Five Minute Spot
by
Mark Cantor

Beware! This story does not concern a five minute spot commercial. But is it new justice system? It is possible? Enjoy a new style of writing detail without detailed description. See if you agree with Mark. Whos on trial?
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...Cast of the Short Story: The Five Minute Spot...
1. Morgan Barton - Lead lawyer
for the prosecution: new law trial.
2. Charlie Banks - Lead lawyer
for the defense: old law trial.
3. Jamie Foreman - Lead Lawyer
for the defense: new law trial.
4. Judge P. T. Farmer - Trial
judge for the new law trial.
5. Corman Belcher - Actor
playing the role of Anthony Langer
in the new law courtroom.
6. Anthony Langer - The
defendant, accused of murder in the old law trial, in the old law courtroom.
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.............an Excerpt...............
Charlie changed channels, squinted
to see the TV screen better and looked out through his fourteenth floor bay window. It was dark
outside. He closed the blinds, which shut off all city light into his law office, turned up the room
lights and put his feet on his desk. Where is Morgan? Wish hed get back here. Got too get to work
on this sweetheart defense.
Nurturing clever thoughts, he
continued to change channels looking for the election returns. Even though the client is a murderer,
doesnt matter. Hes got funds and we can drag it out and out and out and....
He glanced across his office
through the glass partition as Morgan turned on his office lights and strolled to his desk. He waved.
Charlie nodded. He spoke to him even though Morgan couldnt hear him. Hurry up guy. I want to
talk strategy with you. He hummed and wondered why Morgan seemed to take his time. He knows
I want to get on with this case, hot and heavy.
He pushed Morgans intercom
switch. Hey, guy, get your bucket in here, will yuh? Puhleeuz?
Sure. Right away, Morgan said
and walked to the connecting door. He opened his jacket as he approached Charlies desk, he sighed
and sat in one of the large lounge chairs. Charlie, my friend, he said.
What? Charlie said. He tapped
his pen over and over on the desk mat.
I dont want to be part of the
defense on this Langer Case.
What? Dont give me that bull.
Youve got to be. Youre the best
Was the best, Morgan said.
Was? Have you resigned from the
profession? Charlie asked.
Morgan chuckled. Youre full of
questions, Charlie. No, I havent resigned.
Tell me, Morgan. Just so Ill
know whats up. He walked around the desk, sat on the front edge and hiked his trousers. Morgan,
next thing youre gonna hit me with youre gonna tell me you voted in favor of Proposition 300.
He rubbed his forehead to ward off an approaching headache and studied Morgans eyes. His eyes
never lie, he thought. He did. He voted for it.
Youre right, Charlie. We need
the changes
Boy. Talk about loyalty.
Charlie, were losing the justice
in our system of law. Weve manipulated the law far, too long. Clever and legal but not really
ethical. Evidence has to be absolute, not easily manipulated: good in one case, bad in another.
Yeah, I know. I hear your lecture
every once in a while. He wet his lips, walked back to his chair and began rocking. But the
proposition may not pass.
It has passed. I heard it on my car
radio. He chuckled. You should turn the sound up.
Ah there it is now. Yep, Channel
2 with that red check mark in front of Yes. Youre right. My side lost. Well, Morgan, I never paid
much attention to that proposition anyway. But it doesnt go into affect for
Until after the first test case.
Oh yeah. What is the first trial
case?
The city is gonna try the same case using the new methodology and the current system, side-by-side.
You mean, at the same time?
Right. We talked about that.
Yeah, I guess we did.
What case?
Theyll make a selection from a case on this months docket.
November, Charlie said under
his breath. Yeah!
Could be the Langer Case.
Dont tell me that. I can retire,
dripping money, after the Langer case is finished: several months from now. He put his finger to his
lips. He frowned then said: Ill have to get someone to replace you.
Morgan stood and walked behind
the desk, leaned against it and folded his arms. Were still friends, right?
Of course. Theres always room
for diversion.
Diversity, Charlie.
End of the Excerpt from The Five Minute Spot
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